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Below is the poem entitled ONCE I FELL A VICTIM which was written by poet Mohammed Amin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Once i fell a victim to the other side of love
The other side of love i had never known
The other side of pang,anxiety and sorrow
The other side that gave no hope for tomorrow
The other side of love born by lies
The other side known best by the wise

At night when all grandchildren of Adam were asleep
It was then my time to lay in bed and weep
My eyes were like a pond filled with ever flowing tears
Memories of yesterday were now today's fears
My brains and minds were both at war with peace
Then i realized life was not always full of ease

As to the agony the innocent me went through
It was only the stars in the skies that could bear me witness
From distance i could hear the voice of misery calling my name
Love is always not that a fair game
For once thoughts of suicide visited me in the mind
The other side of love to me has been so unkind

I kept asking myself why me?
Was love my greatest enemy?
Maybe it was not meant for me
So i am patiently waiting for the hands of nature
To grant me that one creature
Whom together we can have a brighter future

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Wow a lovely fabulous rhymin jilted love's poem. Luv mightn't b fair game but if u can write so splendidly then u wil forget the failures be it anyting. Kudos! Pls do coment my latest poem.