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Once Again With Words Unspoken

Looking up through the trees Above the canopy of stars I see you, with my heart’s eye Beautifully dressed in heavenly refinement Perched delicately on a soft, fluffy cloud I hear you, with my heart’s ear Singing and rejoicing with psalms of joy Surrounded by a glorious chorus of angels Looking down through the stars You see me, looking up at you You smile a knowing smile Sending a gentle wind to caress my face Drying the tears streaming down unnoticed You reach out a knowing hand Mending the heart that feels lost and broken Filling the empty spaces with peace once again Looking up through the trees Above the canopy of stars I speak to you, with my heart’s voice Thanking you once again for always knowing For always seeing the need without a word spoken I sing to you, with my heart’s voice Songs of praise and thanksgiving for all that you done Faithfully knowing, this and more, you will continue to do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/15/2015 9:24:00 PM
The reader feels your every heart beat of your pen in this one Debra. You are such an ethereal inspiration to me. Peace. :)
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 6/25/2013 12:09:00 AM
Awesome ,,,, and you won with it ;}
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Date: 4/1/2013 6:58:00 AM
Congrats Debra ..lovely win...Donna
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:59:00 AM
Congrats, Debra. Well done. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:05:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2012 2:10:00 PM
Wow, I missed this one. Have to wonder how many others. I see congrats is in order on this. I certainly am glad they saw the excelance in it. It has a way of melting the heart with every phrase. Hope all's well with you. Looking forward to your next new one.
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Date: 5/26/2012 8:16:00 AM
Just beautiful Debra. Congratulations
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on your special 1st place win, Enjoyed reading this marvellous piece...:) Jag
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Debra! Your poem is beautiful and I love the refrain. Simply lovely!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win! this is an awesome poem!!!!-----Lori
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Debra. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2012 10:17:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:12:00 PM
yes another poem is here to touch the heart of one, well done here Deborah, ones soul finds the other one...
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:39:00 PM
DEb, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:03:00 PM
Imagery, quite excellent...reflecting the 'Father's' care for us. Kudos to Debra
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:02:00 PM
Imagery, quite excellent...reflecting the 'Father's' care for us. Kudos to Debra
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:26:00 AM
Beautifully spoken. It's so good to know that there are other christians out there.
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Date: 2/17/2012 11:46:00 PM
Very deep and moving,a truly wonderful read.
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:18:00 PM
If this is your vision of Heaven I would love to see it. The imagery was beautiful and passionate. Good write Debra. I look forward to reading a lot more.
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and beautifully moving. I could feel your emotions run through your touching verses. Excellently crafted. Your gentle heart is felt throughout this read. I've added you as a favorite poet. Million thx for sharing!
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