Once Again Out On the Porch

Dark gray clouds cover the morn's sky
Fog wraps the creek and hills
An eerie green glow radiates
From yard light so surreal

The pampas grass' fronds fluffed white
Standing soldier like straight
No breeze stirs its blossoms or blades
Nature for sunrise waits

The roosters' crows invite sunrise
Doves coo a faint welcome
Crickets resound in symphony
Sing Jimminey in hum

The sun breaks the horizon's line
Cast charm pink 'pon the clouds
Fog's damp floats slowly saturates
Most trees wear its gray shroud
  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/15/2013 5:01:00 AM
very nice masters at work again
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Date: 9/6/2013 6:45:00 PM
Sara...what a lovely morning visiting your porch...thank you...
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
lovely descriptions of your special place, Sara
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:57:00 PM
This is a very masterful write about your stay out on the front porch, very awesome insight here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! You have delighted me with this tremendous poem! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/5/2013 10:57:00 AM
I really love this poem...it took me to another place...excellent imagery!!
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:56:00 AM
i can see how well entrenched you are in the wonder of nature , sara...' pampas grasses' frongs fluffed'.. how detailed and delicate!... you amaze!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:15:00 AM
Hi Sara, Nice work depicting a mellow morning scene.. Ken
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