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Once Again

Rain drops fall down my face Can't believe i'm here in this place again Why do you keep crushing my Already broken heart? What do you get out of Seeing me in pain? What is your reason This time for telling me I'm no good? Does it make you feel better To know it's me you hurt? Rain drop tears running down my face I left here in pain Once again.....

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Date: 2/7/2009 3:04:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Interesting questions. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/23/2009 11:03:00 AM
Written really well, your emotions on paper, so beautifully. Thanks for all the comments! ~Jen~
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Date: 1/10/2009 8:15:00 PM
Beautifully write!!thoughtfully expressed and good composure....Stay Strong...Tyesha
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Date: 1/10/2009 7:52:00 AM
nice poem Breana lovely message...your friend Maryam
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:52:00 PM
Good emotion, good flow, writting always helps to deal with pain and life emotions. The reader can feel your pain. Thanks for sharing, Judy Riley
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