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On Winter's Road

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On Winter's Road

the tires on black ice spin out of control. . . fresh snow swirls soft and white Written 12/7/13 looking out at a snowy street, For the monoku contest of Broken Wings

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  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:12:00 AM
    Hi Andrea .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 12:29:00 PM
    Appropriate to remember the Winter of 2013 (and others). A well-done monoku and brevity piece. Cheers on your win.

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 8:37:00 AM
    I like how you did this one, congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:24:00 PM
    andrea, this is cleverly written because you've used vivid contrast, black then white, and I also like your use of alliteration - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. This is a very vivid line. Unfortunately, I am experiencing some of this in Colorado this time of the year.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:45:00 PM
    - One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:20:00 PM
    Wow~~~Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 11:57:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:56:00 AM
    I hope that a crash was not the end results..Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 3:49:00 AM
    an experience or an imagery what ever may be a great poem.penned very well.Excellent.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 1:30:00 PM
    I couldn't stand to look either. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 3:47:00 PM
    love this one. A big winner here. Not sure if I got the hang of monoku from Soup's instructions on form.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Drive careful. Hope your staying warm. My visit's are sporadic now, a little off the norm. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:20:00 AM
    Awesome as usual Andrea, just popping in quickly on your side.. Sorry for the absence.. :) Wilma

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:00:00 AM
    nice Monoku friend Andrea. Advance Merry Christmas to you and to your family ;)

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Oh, this conjures up all kinds of images. Love it You should make this a new contest and ask for poems telling the backstory for being out on that winter's night.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 12:33:00 AM
    Nice contrasts, Andrea.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 10:18:00 PM
    Very nice and timely. I must be very careful this winter especially when walking.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Very nice Andrea....describes the conditions around Oklahoma very well the last few day as well...

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:25:00 PM
    I enjoyed your verse this evening. Light & Love