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On the Raod to Carolina

“On the Road to Carolina”   

By Miriam McCue - creator of poetry.

dedicated to Bubba, my grandson who is not allowed to do what is in this poem. And Bob 
who maybe did.

Warning: do not practice the activities below, unless you are a professional in the field.

This is meant to be sung accompanied by acoustic guitar music.

Verse 1 
We’re on the road to Carolina,
Me & Bubba, my best friend.

We’re going to stop in Savanna.
To pick up ole toothless Glenn.

Verse 2
We’re ridin’ in my ole pickup,
The three of us have no fear.

‘Cause toothless Glenn of Savanah,
Brought along six cases of beer.

Verse 3
When it gets on towards evenin’,
We park the old pick up.

We’re all sittin’ on the tailgate,
Drinkin’ all the cases up.

(whoops and whoopies )

Verse 4
When we get to Carolina,
Our heads feel all blown about.

Glen is barfin’ out the winder,
And Bubba has completely passed out.


NOTE:   TO be more politically correct: I am the designated driver.

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  1. Date: 12/31/2009 11:29:00 AM
    ~~Miriam~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/31/2009 3:28:00 AM
    I already put this piece to music...Toothpick hangin out of my mouth and all...I'd like Scotch though please...Funny one here Miriam...God Bless...Taz

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 10:46:00 PM
    heeheehee. You are a very fun writer, Miriam. It looks to me like you are new on here same as me too. From another poem of yours I guessed you were an older lady now. WEll, you can give everyone doing humor here a run for their money! And I am so happy I inspired you to write a cat poem. I'm gonna find one of MY many cat poems RIGHT NOW! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 9:10:00 AM
    note this is a fun and great write as a person known for writting things to people laugh it's great to have a poem make me laugh for once exelent write dont worry bout being correct. Your far from a bad poetry writter this is great and i am a proffesional in both fields haha great job keep writting