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On the Cocoon

on the cocoon
the butterfly unfurls
a baby loon cries

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Susan Gentry

Date: 12/23/2015 6:31:00 AM

Congrats!

Curtis Johnson

Date: 12/19/2015 10:30:00 AM

Good work Charles. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/18/2015 10:32:00 PM

Precisely beautiful Charles.. well thats the beauty of a haiku.. few words n much said.. big congrats on ur big win!

James Inman

Date: 12/18/2015 9:30:00 PM

Very nice write Charles, love the cut.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 12/18/2015 6:17:00 PM

Great Haiku, Charles. Congrats on your win.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2015 2:27:00 PM

Congrats on the high spot here Charles with a good piece indeed.'

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2015 10:03:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku! Congrats. This for me is the most difficult form, I admire people like you who are so good at it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2015 1:26:00 AM

Well done Charles, Happy Holidays. LINDA

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/18/2015 12:10:00 AM

Nice to see a Haiku in with the topsters, Charles, well done. Regards, Viv

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 7:14:00 PM

ps... WOW, thank you, Charles, now I see why this haiku placed high. SKAT

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 7:12:00 PM

Hello Charles, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/27/2013 12:21:00 PM

Wow a great haiku on metamorphosis! Liked it lots! Do pls review my latest poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2013 11:34:00 AM

Ahh!! The chances of survival are slim..I have noticed your work today and came up engrossed..Sara

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/20/2013 10:03:00 AM

Dear Charles Deserving of many more comments. I guess when a poet is away; a poet can be forgotten. You are still on my favorites list from long ago.