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On that dark alley

On that dark alley, the wind whispered Listen, it said, I am the bringer of news Goosebumps on my arms, I stood and heard This creepy voice and looked for signs of cues None came except this cold voice, so angered! That dark night, I shook with fright Yet obedient, I gave the wind my audience I am sick, it said, sick of this birthright You humans, have taken to abhorrence Look at the plight of this providence! Pollution, everywhere and anywhere Nowhere, can I flow as free as air Nor can I breathe purity Nor can I sense chastity What has happened to humanity? As the wind lamented, my fright disappeared It shook and pity overwhelmed my heart But the wind talked once more, as I feared I shall bring forth destruction and down shall be those smart Those who think the world is made up of their sole part! Be prepared, it continued, be prepared for the havoc The world should be cleaned in each block I shall do so via a shock The time shall come with the clock Be prepared for the rejuvenation! On that dark alley, my blood turned cold And my heart for my likes become hard Even if with love and care it is mould I pray for the coming of the Bard The one to cure the world of this negativity!
Placed 3rd in the contest.... :)

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:25:00 AM
    :) Thk You so much everyone! :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:04:00 AM
    Anoucheka congrats on your win, love it..David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning poetry Anouch, hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 3:29:00 PM
    Hello fine new poet friend what a master word smith you are, just loved the topic and the personification. Congrad's on your fine verse winning big! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win. I love the line praying for the coming of the Bard!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 7:33:00 AM
    congrats Anoucheka on a superb write and win for this wonderful entry luv.. captivating tale..

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:48:00 PM
    Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:46:00 PM
    nice write Anoucheka

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 6:59:00 PM
    funny you should ask.

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/16/2012 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ur opinion....:)
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Please list this as Verse, or Rhyme for a Quatrain has 4 lines ;) could even list it as Personification because you are making the wind talk! Thanks for the entry Light & Love

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/15/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops thks meant to list it as Quintain...! Listed it as rhyme finally!!
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 12:16:00 PM
    the answer is blowing in the wind Anoucheka...enjoyed...Joseph

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/15/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thks to you! :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Very well written an expression of our desire for a clean healthy world, let's pray it will one day, love vie

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/15/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeps........:) thks