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On a Winter Day

On a winter day the cold wind flies It's a long time till spring in May But watch how fast it'll go by On a winter day The inside invites you to stay A gentle wind seems to shift and sigh The biting chill leads the way Air smacks my face making me cry Yet I linger as I lay I'll never know why On a winter day

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/6/2013 11:24:00 PM

Yet I linger as I lay, I'll never know why on a winter day << perfect ending! I'm reminded of times, lying out in the cold snow, freezing to death. It's too beautiful to just go inside, despite the nasty chill. Snow just makes your mind wander... good memories. I'll be looking out for your name, my friend. Good work!

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/10/2013 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much!! It's nice to know that someone else feels the same way I do about the snow and winter. It's so peaceful and pretty.

Jim Joyce

Date: 2/19/2013 5:37:00 PM

truly a talented writer:))..love yur work

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/20/2013 10:14:00 AM

Oh that's so nice of you to say! Thank you so much. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2013 11:07:00 PM

Well, I am the first to comment to this one and I hope you get more comments. because it is a good one for how we feel just lying around wishing for spring to come!!

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/13/2013 11:27:00 AM

Aw thank you! Yeah, Winter is actually my favorite season, but Spring IS really beautiful. :D