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On A Winter Day

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On A Winter Day

On a winter day the cold wind flies
It's a long time till spring in May
But watch how fast it'll go by
On a winter day
The inside invites you to stay
A gentle wind seems to shift and sigh
The biting chill leads the way
Air smacks my face making me cry
Yet I linger as I lay
I'll never know why
On a winter day

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:24:00 PM
    Yet I linger as I lay, I'll never know why on a winter day << perfect ending! I'm reminded of times, lying out in the cold snow, freezing to death. It's too beautiful to just go inside, despite the nasty chill. Snow just makes your mind wander... good memories. I'll be looking out for your name, my friend. Good work!

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/10/2013 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!! It's nice to know that someone else feels the same way I do about the snow and winter. It's so peaceful and pretty.
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:37:00 PM
    truly a talented writer:)) yur work

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 2/20/2013 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh that's so nice of you to say! Thank you so much. :D
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:07:00 PM
    Well, I am the first to comment to this one and I hope you get more comments. because it is a good one for how we feel just lying around wishing for spring to come!!

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 2/13/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw thank you! Yeah, Winter is actually my favorite season, but Spring IS really beautiful. :D