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Old Smeaton's Tower

old Smeaton’s Tower spends its retirement dreaming recalling its youth no light in its eyes glares at the young usurper on Eddystone reef Jack Horne for Russell’s In the Light of Haiku contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2011 5:25:00 PM

I can see maybe a lighthouse that has been put out..Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and the kind review about my fall morn..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:48:00 PM

wowie, this is one of the best I've seen yet. You are on a roll tonight, Jack!!

Richard Pickett

Date: 9/9/2011 12:12:00 PM

Very nice but sad one here, Enjoyed it...Thanks for sharing...God Bless...Taz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 11:34:00 AM

deeply written Jack.. a landmark in your country luv? such a breathtaking description from u..good luck in the contest.. we have many lighthouses still functioning in seashore areas only in NJ... towering white elephants in many places luv.. good luck..