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old maid

There was a old maid that lived in a house, That old maid took a look under her house and she could not tell what is down there. The old maid took a candle and went down there and she saw a dead body and it was an old maid that was there before her. The old maid did not know what to do ? So she said I am out of here no more old maid in this house bye.

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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 8:38:00 PM
    You have described both old maids fairly well here. Once again, you can use fewer words more effectively in shorter sentences.