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Old Henry Vega

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Old Henry Vega

So many Cantankerous, old argumentative  men
Live all their days in misery,
Rehashing and recouping from an old war injury.
As Buster the dog slept soundly.

An rusty fishing rod, stood in the corner,
Buster the dog flaps his ear and wiggles his tail
 His friend sat in the same spot all day 
He just wants to go outside to play 

Arthritis in his knees
Aches and pain
And varicose veins
Acupuncture, homeopathy, and osteopathy,

His day are numbered to twenty antacids pills,
Who is the consultant of his will?
What would grandma think of old Henry Vega?
As he become the Messiah of misery

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:06:00 AM
    love the third stanza. and Messiah of misery. What a great ending. The whole poem is good i was just highlighting above what i loved the best. Great job.

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 9/12/2012 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your feedback I am improving as i go along. thank you for the boost.. one love annie
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 6:45:00 PM
    miserable old man,sounds like what we all become,lol,great write Annie

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 9/12/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard Palmer for comment it means a lot to me. one love annie