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Old Excuses

I heard dawn's break through drowsy dreams Its silver feet upon the roof Eaves shiver wet, excuses spring With murmured sounds, my reason schemes To burrow down and doze aloof Remembering, now, a distant place A childhood bed, the warm embrace to stretch my arms with no regrets And see that place...and rainbows, yet From crayons of time, I can't forget I loved the rain upon the grass Beyond the margins framed by glass. A sense of time with mute caress, Will find the place my soul resides I'm still a child, and so it goes I'll play outside in mud-drenched dress I'll dance and play in soggy clothes With sticky earth between my toes My one excuse to stay in bed to dream,....and turn my childhood loose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/12/2013 11:56:00 AM
Carrie, congrats...SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2013 6:48:00 PM
Love it so much! Congratz on your win too! I won also!
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Date: 1/10/2013 10:34:00 PM
Loved it Carrie, congrats ....Seren
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:48:00 PM
Excellent as always Carrie. How near we all are to that small child within. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:48:00 PM
Carrie, , nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:48:00 PM
Yes we can be anyone in our dreams. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations, my friend...not surprised at all...wish I could make excuses like that! - Tim
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:51:00 AM
Beautifully written Carrie! Childhood memories ought to be revisited alot just to keep adulthood in perspective. Very well penned! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:22:00 AM
This is an absolutely stunning write! I'm faving this one. "Crayons of time" - I LOVE this. Congratulations on a fabulous win!
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:09:00 AM
Congratulation Carrie I hate staying in bed lol xx
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Date: 1/5/2013 10:51:00 AM
Love this!!Very poetic indeed.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/3/2013 6:28:00 PM
this is the most poetic of the "excuses" poems I have seen to date. How I wish I'd thought to do it this way. You made excuses so dreamy!!
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Date: 1/2/2013 10:50:00 PM
Oh my, Carrie...you've done it again...blown me away...Sometimes I 'meditate' to relax...I often go back to my childhood memories...if I do it just right, the scenes are unbelievably vivid...I am actually THERE...feeling the exact feelings I felt then...pretty cool...Happy New Year, dear friend - Tim
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Date: 1/1/2013 1:24:00 PM
a sure winner here, Carrie. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
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