Old Age

How my aging bones creak
Sighs the  rocking chair under 
The burden of time.

lifesenryu

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Shirin Neshat

Date: 4/9/2012 2:00:00 AM

nice

Ruben Ramos

Date: 11/11/2011 4:27:00 AM

Thanks for introducing me to Senryu form. Its amazing how much is captured in such few words. You've captured my aging process. Time does add weight to so many dimensions, our spirit, mind, emotions, soul, "midsection". LOL. Thanks

Kuttan Murukesan

Date: 11/7/2011 2:17:00 AM

nice ! perfect imagination in combination with superb artistry in rendering . it bears the radio active quality of positive inclination.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/15/2011 3:19:00 PM

Hi Meg, Thanks for the comment. Funny, but last week I was thinking about some of the poets that seemed to have disappeared from the site and had wondered how your book signing went. This week I heard from Cile Beer on facebook and then saw you had stopped in at poetry soup. It was really nice to hear from you again. Vince

John Freeman

Date: 6/15/2011 8:04:00 AM

Just Cool Margaret!!! Just the way it goes with the old earthly house. Shall we restore the old window panes, apply a little paint to it's face? Oh, I hear the new house will be constructed of pure substance. The everlasting material that shall never grow old. Smile, Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2011 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Meg for stopping by to comment on my poetry today. I hope you will be back soon with some more of your Outstanding poetry. Love and blessings always to you and yours my friend, Carol

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 3/2/2010 5:07:00 AM

Youth has no idea what age brings. This poem reminds me that Bengay gets used more each winter! Well written.

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 3:34:00 AM

excellent! can hear the creaking

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/14/2010 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful and lovely in words although painful in realization. You have brilliantly portrayed old age that too in few words. A gem of a Poem. Thanks. Best wishes and love Ravindra