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Oh Your Smile

Oh your smile brightly gleams In my sweet summer dreams In the sun-reflected streams Then your smile beams brightly again Ones again the summer goes Its a bummer that the drummer Cried on the plummers fries Oh your smile is pretty Its most pretty In the city

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2012 2:21:00 AM
I'll give you a smile.. :o)
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Date: 6/15/2012 10:12:00 AM
Very good write here! I can imagin it now...in the city where I live just watching for the prettyest smile....like my hubbys.... hope to see ya around more Jane
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Date: 1/3/2012 6:06:00 PM
nice poem Julie it's got a nice ring to it! ~Mini Dr. Dover
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Date: 1/1/2012 3:13:00 PM
Cried on the plummers fries, very amusing.
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Date: 1/1/2012 2:50:00 PM
hey nice work your awesome
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