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Oh What a Friend

friends are sweet and sometime's mean friend's are all kind's no speacail inten. they can make your life happy ,or a living hell i sure know one was a bad spell the jeoulesy the rage the hate inside came out of her like a dragon insight. there's nothing you can do to help these kind the hurt they have is scares left behine , some of us live from day to day .

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Date: 11/29/2009 4:19:00 PM
Hi Alisa! What a truthful depiction of the variety of people that come in your life and the hurt some of them generously give. A beautiful poem indeed. May I quote here a Quatrain from my book RUBAI'YAT OF JOSH MALIHABADI- A Drop & the Ocean: For your shortcomings those that you lose/ May revert and your friendship choose/ But he can never convert to be your friend/ Who has turned an enemy because of your virtues. Thanks for your lovely comments on my poem Today Also You Did Not Come. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:28:00 AM
sadly, it true. Keep writing.
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