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Offering

I'd offer you a hand, but every time you say "Don't bother." I'd offer you a hand, But I just get dirty looks. What would you do, If I were to offer a foot?

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Raul Moreno

Date: 9/29/2009 11:51:00 AM

Sarah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Gael Attal

Date: 1/22/2009 2:17:00 PM

What a lovely poem!!! Cleverly put! Congratulations!

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/22/2009 1:55:00 PM

LOL, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, made me laugh at the end, Good one..God Bless*Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/22/2009 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations sarah, on "Offering" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 1/22/2009 9:08:00 AM

Sarah - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Date: 1/21/2009 2:07:00 PM

Had to chuckle at the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Daver Austin

Date: 1/19/2009 3:25:00 PM

I get a kick out of your stuff, Sarah. Good humor....good vengeance....good ridance. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Donna Golden

Date: 1/19/2009 3:25:00 PM

A foot, indeed! Well written, Sarah. Congratulations for being featured this week. Donna G.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2009 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/19/2009 9:14:00 AM

Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/4/2009 4:51:00 PM

people are just sometimes to proud to accept help from others and that is me sometimes. great and real poetry, enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS.... [SMILE]