Of Russell

"I'd say" you are sidestepping into rhyme, the witches spell, direction time, casting of thoughts, will powers mime, beware the rhyming spell, in time, 4 ye are doing well. sublime. Don Careful Russell rhyme will get ya:)

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/22/2012 6:13:00 PM

Maybe your monicker should be rhymer. Lve your writes

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/21/2012 2:00:00 PM

Nothing wrong with rhyme don and great to read you mate.."

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/20/2012 10:01:00 AM

great spell Don,,,, thank you for reading " twisted love ;} it's a poem about a serial killer or a psycho path ;} you have a great day ;}

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2012 8:50:00 PM

Ha, ha, funny Don! Do you think that I will fall into the rhyming trap? Nah, I'm a more experience poet than that, :) I am still a fan of the non-rhyme though...more expressive that way in my opinion! But the rhyming can be such fun, and mesmerizing to boot! You do an awesome job at rhyming my friend! It seems as if it's second nature to you...or should I call it first nature! I appreciate you reading into my works my friend, and this poem of yours is just perfect! You're awesome, Great Work!!