Ode To the Stars

Twinklers glint, shining above clouds
with a relay of dots in softest gold,
the sky transforming in a blink
to illuminate a shimmer in the air.

I wonder at your angled radiance 
while frozen on the spot... my eyes awaken
and up there, a parade of twirling sparklers
like miniature bulb lights, combust.

The hues change from silver to red
a flicker splattering heaven's canopy,
that lovers gaze to breathe in the dew
of satin webs so delicate and frail.

Make a wish, your vibrant glare says
my face blushes praying for one dream
that makes me saunter, as in a trance,
drowning in the grandeur of your bliss.  


May 2018 Premiere Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/14/2014 7:05:00 AM
I do love the stars. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:07:00 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the win, nette
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:23:00 PM
NETTE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 1/13/2014 1:57:00 PM
Oh, such serenity here... I love the placement of saunter and grandeur, that roll of tongue, so much like a purr! Congrats, Soul-sis. I am getting better, but not finished this flu yet... it has such claws. Maybe I should write "healthy" poetry, lol, positive spins and forward thinking, maybe the energy I put into verse needs to change :D Ah, well, this poesy did my heart good. Hugs and Love--- PS our girl is now up to 41 inches, but we struggle with getting her weight up. She nibbles... xoxox
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Date: 11/11/2013 3:09:00 PM
I love the stars, and I loved this poem, too! A wonderful, wonderful ode, Nette! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the great comments, as always! :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:53:00 AM
amazing beautifully penned piece
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:05:00 PM
An excellent ode to stars my dear friend! A winner & fave of me. Kudos! TYSM & always good luck to you. How are you? Hope you & your family are safe always & hope the typhoon is over. Hope no more Z. So sad about the devastation though can't watch on my slow computer. Just read on BKK post. I'm always keeping u in my thoughts & prayers. There's nothing we can do than to pray. Hope to hear fr u soon . My mom txt me yest. & thanks God they're fine. Talk 2 u again soon. Big Hugs! Love lotsLeo
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:27:00 AM
WOW! You truly amaze me by your grand brilliance you have displayed here my friend! I am always impressed by your talented writings but this one seems to go over the top with its grandiosity! I love the night stars anyway and this poem made me want to visit them more frequently so I can see their beauty once again, as your poem expresses its own beauty within itself! What a fantastic piece Nette, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:31:00 AM
I too hope things are okay with you since the devastation of the horrible storm! I'm praying for your you and your country! Take care my friend!
Date: 11/9/2013 8:14:00 AM
You have painted the night sky with brilliance.
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:45:00 AM
Very good imagery in this poem Nette.Lovely read.
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:48:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..How are you and your family weathering the storm?..I have seen some pictures on TV of the area..It looks really bad and scary..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:36:00 PM
Sweet and a smile-maker. Oh, hon, I am so very very very relieved you are okay and hurt for your country. It seems to get such a wallop from nature! Hubby has been using the computer lots (looking for a part-time job to help pay off some bills.) I joined a gym and I am trying to get fit/healthy, for myself as well as for "our" girl. Will get back "here" as soon as I get a routine down. Verity is finally staying cold-free (knock on wood). Love ya. Stay you- xoxox
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:07:00 PM
You do your title great justice!!! And the entire heaven of stars!!!
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:05:00 PM
Very lovely and a keen eye on the beauty of the stars, nette
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Date: 11/8/2013 6:24:00 PM
Lovely poem you have written. Isn't the night wonderful.
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:08:00 PM
Simply gorgeous Nette ! You never disappoint with your beautiful expressions......love,Deb
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:09:00 PM
- Beautiful Nette .... You and I at the starry sky today .... the same theme :)))) - Have a lovely weekend my dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:06:00 PM
Utterly beautiful. The ending gave me strong goosebumps. Love it!
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