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Ode To An Acre of Land and the Building That Stands There

Tall and pure oasis So much has changed You remain constant and lovely Gentle, morning green grass Breaks like waves, laps at the shores Of white, gray, and yellow stones Towering above me, silent and sure Chiseled marble, granite spires, oak Wrought iron, your scent is old A familiar volume I keep close to me The reflections in your pools Still glass, not a leaf disturbs Irises cling to your walls The distance beyond you sways Spreading lazily into shade trees Sun-tinted pastures and weathered fences I walk with reverence, still, after so long Your ground is my sanctuary It houses my past I am a child forever in front of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2013 12:10:00 AM
Jeremy... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 10/15/2013 5:03:00 AM
- Pleased to read your "old" featured poem - It's a well-written poem. - Congratulations, Jeremy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:33:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Jeremy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:11:00 PM
Jeremy,Congrats on your win.Excellent write!
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Date: 6/3/2012 3:19:00 PM
Thanks very much to everyone for reading my poem, you're all very sweet. -Jeremy
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:28:00 AM
Jeremy congrats on your win, great imagery here..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:29:00 AM
Hi Jeremy :)! I really enjoyed reading this nostalgic write--- and how you ended this was very touching... I think if I were that building, I would have smiled... Thank you so much for entering this wonderful poem and super congrats on your win :D!
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Date: 5/25/2012 1:36:00 AM
Jeremy I love the description you gave here..David
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