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Octelle for contest Stardust

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Octelle for contest Stardust

I wish you were real dry stardust
You bother me with bitter fuss!

Doctor doctor shut his voice
Fairy fairy block his noise

Huff and puff all my time gone
zero tolerance- jerk zone

hammer his skull, sink in deep
blow hole not one more sick peep

I wish you were real dry stardust
You bother me with bitter fuss!

written 7/8/2013

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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Mom

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:10:00 AM
    I am happy to see this one for the contest.... deep... and one can relate...xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 7:15:00 AM
    wow, this is a unique take on stardust. Nice to see something different. I love that last part, wishing someone to be stardust. so funny. it's great seeing you back here today, Doris.

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:55:00 AM
    I am so glad to see you back writing my friend!...I trust you are now in good health?...This is a hilarious take on the contest using your unique sense of humor...Good luck! - Tim