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Octelle For Contest Stardust

I wish you were real dry stardust You bother me with bitter fuss! Doctor doctor shut his voice Fairy fairy block his noise Huff and puff all my time gone zero tolerance- jerk zone hammer his skull, sink in deep blow hole not one more sick peep I wish you were real dry stardust You bother me with bitter fuss! written 7/8/2013

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Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 1:16:00 PM

Lol...like it... Skat

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2013 5:03:00 AM

Reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2013 1:10:00 AM

I am happy to see this one for the contest.... deep... and one can relate...xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2013 7:15:00 AM

wow, this is a unique take on stardust. Nice to see something different. I love that last part, wishing someone to be stardust. so funny. it's great seeing you back here today, Doris.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/8/2013 2:55:00 AM

I am so glad to see you back writing my friend!...I trust you are now in good health?...This is a hilarious take on the contest using your unique sense of humor...Good luck! - Tim

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 6:41:00 AM

Thank you. it has been a while but I am good for my state of days. lol