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Ocean In the Deep Space of My Heart

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I’m diving deep down into the ocean world full of spectacular plasmatic bubbles enchanting creatures breathed them out orange, yellow, pink , purple and red wallowing through dazzling soft neon-colored starfishes in quest of its most marvelous graces weeds with various tones of green wagging gracefully along the way like curtains in musical enchantments and coral reefs in mountain ranges with their majestic beauty in carousels of fish and seahorses still diving deep down into the ocean world in quest of its marvelous graces in unfathomable depth of rainbow-colored whirlpools deep within I see from afar my precious pearls
8th Place Winner Contest: Space Odyssey Judged: 10/5/12 Sponsor: Poet Nathan -----D September 21,2012 by Leonora Galinta

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Date: 11/17/2012 9:27:00 PM
This is just beautiful. no wonder you won. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Loenora. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 11:30:00 PM
Congrats my dear friend for this very creative poem you wrote....cheers!! God bless you always!!! (^_^)
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:11:00 PM
This poem is very touching...and it is quite lovely. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:23:00 PM
HELLO BIRTHDAY GIRL,,WERE ARE YOU, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:20:00 PM
SUPER CONGRATS LEONORA ON A BRILLIANT WRITE AND WIN FOR THIS DEEP SPACE DELIGHT LUV ..
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
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Date: 9/25/2012 11:49:00 AM
wow!!! oceantastic indeed!!I like it..you have a very creative mind my dear friend...God bless!!
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:45:00 PM
wow, this is so full of lovely imagery. Reminding me of a circus beneath the sea. I love how you ended up seeing the precious pearl deep inside the sea. WAs this for a contest. It's just wonderful.
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Date: 9/23/2012 10:45:00 PM
Leonora, wow.... wow! I'm a spacey kind of gal. I'm simple, and with a taste of my own.. and I love everything about this poem. Love this image "spectacular plasmatic bubbles" a lovely pearly poem... adding this to my favorites poems..hope Nathan loves it... i sure did~ xox~pd
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Date: 9/23/2012 12:43:00 AM
Wow!A wonderful place to visit!Love this poem!
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:20:00 PM
lovely done love it Leo,beautiful
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:44:00 PM
truly beautiful write, Leonora
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:14:00 AM
Yea! Sometimes we have to dive deep to get our "pearl"...good write. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:14:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poem!

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