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Ocean Haiku

Sound of crashing waves Fresh smell of salt water air Peace of the ocean

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Matthew Anish

Date: 4/28/2013 12:16:00 PM

I like the haiku form and was glad to see that you stuck to the 5 7 5 form. Thank you for your kind words - we share the same auspicious name! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2013 9:34:00 PM

Matthew, love the tranquil feeling in the haiku... a very relaxing imagery... xox..Linda

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/23/2013 8:51:00 AM

Breathtaking Beauty here!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/22/2013 5:01:00 PM

Nice write and anything about the sea is right on to me.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/20/2013 1:37:00 PM

Excellent haiku. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Joel Hunt

Date: 4/18/2013 11:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your haiku.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/17/2013 9:26:00 PM

Yes, especially when you are in the middle of the ocean and breathe in the fresh air. There is nothing like it. You captured it, Matthew. Awesome!