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Below is the poem entitled Ocean which was written by poet Afroze Ali. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Waves carry away sand
but a few grains left behind...
memories in my mind.

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Afroze, had this been for the contest? I don't see any congrats here, but I have an idea what may have happened. I did not notice this the first time I saw it, but you have repeated "a few" in line two, and if not for that, I think it could have been a winning ocean haiku,

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    Date: 4/25/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops yes that was by mistake. Didn't check. Thanks Andrea for letting me know.
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 11:59:00 PM
    this is a really lovely haiku for the contest. Sorry you missed out on my faves list, my friend! Keep the title of your poem I faved in your mind in case I open up that contest again.