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Obscured Lenses

First look, glasses as my eyes glance From left to right I begin to read Much as if I were in a trance My education faulted for this deed Second look with randomness I search Looking for a pattern, no not the glasses Does this person attends a formal church This poem is one of their trespasses Third look now the compulsion takes me The poem was edited to fit the picture But I say this isn’t possible, it can’t be If so they surely deserve a stricture Three looks, glasses or not, all were done in vain If you copy, paste, add punctuation then it’s plain Poem by Wayland Bunch for Occlusion contest. This is a rhymed form of poetry under 20 lines, but technically it fits better into the category of Sonnet, so I don't know if it will be accepted. If not back to the drawing board lol.

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Date: 6/27/2014 11:51:00 AM
first I am workin with a South Carolina/ohio education, so what is stricture? Second, I have no idea what a sonnet consists of. Reading your piece I have began deconstructing the dumb in me. lol thNKX 4 sharing.
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 6/27/2014 4:47:00 PM
That's a very good question about stricture lol. I guess this one was done on phone with auto correct, or just a plain old typo. I am still thinking of what rhyme I could have used, did this one a while back if you will notice. Thanks for the comment. Also had a couple of other grammatical errors, so thanks for drawing my attention to this poem.
Date: 3/25/2013 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:05:00 PM
Hola..mi amigo *B-) Wayland, it is nice seeing you try out these contest. I wish I had a daring pen. By the way an interesting poem you pinned here. All is tiny from my phone. Monkey movie time. ..pd
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 1/29/2013 9:27:00 PM
Unfortunately I did this over the wrong poem lol. Now I have to decide if I want to try and decipher the other spectacles poem.

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