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Object of My Dewire

Come on you stupid internet!
Why do you refuse to connect?
You “cannot display”
The server’s webpage - 
Don’t send errors, send me a tech!

Received 8th place in "Techno-Limericks" contest

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  1. Date: 11/16/2011 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the Techno-Limerick contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:06:00 PM
    Hey, I never even saw this one yet! This one really deserved the top ten. Awesome, Susan!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 4:03:00 PM
    Susan, congratulations on your win with this very witty and clever limerick. You got the frustration we have with computers so many of us deal with on daily basis. Thanks for joining in on the fun and have a great night. Alexa

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 10:21:00 AM
    How cute Susan-and make it a really hot Tech., too :) Congrats. on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 10:06:00 AM
    Congrats Susan on a great win for this wonderful witty Limerick luv..

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:41:00 AM
    Your title is a hoot!! Love this one! Congratulations on a funny poem and win!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:27:00 AM
    Your angst is well expressed in this witty poem, Susan. There are a lot of us who want to scream out for a technician when we keep getting error messages. The competition was stiff, so all who placed had to be in the top tier of both Alexa's and my rankings. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 10:31:00 AM
    Heehee, oh gosh! How I know this feeling!!! "stupid internet" indeed!

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 6:57:00 AM
    cool piece Susan.. sometimes we all experience these frustrations with our computers .. oh.. just want to say thankxx for honoring my entry with a win in your wonderful contest... my true story experience made it easy for words to develop..luv.. appreciate friend..luv..

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 11:51:00 AM
    (that is linguistically correct please) chucklin!

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 11:47:00 AM