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Obesity

His more than ample physique, was a profuse plethora of abundance, a surfeit of shameless gastronome that defined a cornucopia of excess and a masticating overindulgence. Such a pity to gormandize, to binge, gorge, and satiate. to devour in such excess, in such morbid over indulgence, in such heinous and nefarious gluttony. His self-inflicted surfeit of sustenance debilitated and shaped his identity, his image, his gargantuan and elephantine appearance, and nauseated and revolted all who gazed upon his abominable and abhorrent obesity.

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Date: 7/26/2009 4:01:00 PM
Oh wow, so very well written and hard hitting. Not sure you will win the popularity contest with this one, lol. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/26/2009 4:00:00 PM
A clever use of descriptive vocabulary that is all relative, very interesting - Paula Stansfield.
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Date: 7/26/2009 6:04:00 AM
Wow, Ed, you didn't leave any adjectives for us!, Thank you Bill
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