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O' Desire

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O' Desire

O' Desire, you give me my great love
O' Desire,  you sent him from Heaven above
O' Desire, how you let him dazzle my fire
O' Desire, how you entrance me with his eyes
O' Desire, burning fires do burn bright with him in sight
O' Desire, like a warm hearth of fiery sweet love, he is
O' Desire, how you make me want to marry him
O' Desire, you give me a yearning of his forever love
O' Deisre, you give me the desire to only be with him
O' Desire, you give me the gift to marry him for eternity
O' Desire, you give the gift the end will never be in sight
O' Desire, you give the gift of eternal happiness and love

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  1. Date: 11/24/2010 5:29:00 PM
    Happy Thanksgiving day, susan

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 10:59:00 PM
    You've personified the beauty of love and desire here in a joyous way. I'm so happy for you if this is taken from recent, personal experience. Thanks for sharing, Susan!

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 2:44:00 PM
    O'WoW Susan this is a brilliant piece... its a form all its own... but more expressive like free verse too... much passion and emotion in every single line .. enjoyed your creativity with luv.. did u see my wedding photos on my blog???

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 9:52:00 AM
    Such a joyful write, Susan. Your poem made my day so much brighter! Love, Carolyn