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Now Vanished

A gold carriage sped me away one happy day- the world to see. Now vanished is youth’s luxury. Ahead of me, a pumpkin waits. Written Aug. 6, 2014 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's RIDE ON A PATHYA VA Poetry Contest Theme: Carriage

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  1. Date: 8/13/2014 7:59:00 AM
    Fairy tale magic with a moral. I love it! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 7:20:00 PM
    Aww loved the fairy tale reference, beautiful sweetie, grats on your win!!!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 3:00:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:38:00 AM
    Back wid huge congrats on ur winning awesome write Andrea!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:14:00 AM
    ohh how you charm me with this cinderella-like approach, andie... thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 8/11/2014 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    in response to jan's message, i got a system error while poating the list... sigh!
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 9:29:00 AM
    dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

    Date: 8/10/2014 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its disappeared Andrea! this happened to Nette's last contest too for the Jue Ju - i was almost at the end sending my congrats went back to page and it disappeared BUT you definitely were placed:-) hugs jan xx
    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/10/2014 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Win?? I can't see this being judged when I go to contest page? For real?
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 6:19:00 AM
    Andrea, this theme you associated with changing phases of age-wonderful. Congrats for the win. Mohan

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 5:36:00 AM
    Very funny but cute write, Andrea. Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 11:47:00 PM
    Was the carriage in a dream? Youth flies away so fast. I remember when I thought the year 2000 was so far away. I hope you are well and best of luck in the contest! Peace &Love Matthew Anishsb9

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:55:00 PM
    Ha ha! Cute one!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:27:00 PM
    Good ride, Andrea. So interesting to see all the different ways the theme is interpreted.

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM
    so lovely Andrea gl in contest hugs

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 5:39:00 PM
    It's sad then it's happy and sad, and I LIKE PUMPKINS!~ that's my in-ex-SpUrt opinion! This short shot of magic is good San AndreaS; I took a day off the Soup yesterday to regroup from the poop and now im rhyming like a StooP-Ed Dupe on a Loop. Howdy and Bye! ~ Peace and chicken GreaseYo!~7rAted.not XraTed!:)-hey, ya' never really notice just how many times they use the same damn CAPTCHA letters until you stay on here commenting as much as you do...I KNOW YOU ARE LAUGHING CUS U KNOW WHAT I MEAN!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 3:35:00 PM
    Youth is a state of mind, where we are forever young. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 2:58:00 PM
    Each one of these completely unique..that is what I love about the various each visualizes! Good one!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 1:30:00 PM
    Is this about Cinderella? I have no idea what form this is though, but you sure gave it an interesting take! I really liked the message in the second stanza... btw, i checked out the song, thanks-- but I have no idea on how to write lyrics for that-- very nice melody though! And I think I saw the same video as you did, with the beaches, which interestingly enough were in Negros Occidental, one of the provinces here...

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:45:00 AM
    Love it. Make yourself a delicious pumkin pie. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:01:00 AM
    Oh what a joy to read,, this is so good

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 5:41:00 AM
    Wonderful write Andrea! very witty indeed! gl in contest!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 3:12:00 AM
    wonderful take on the theme Andrea; Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx