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Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

Soft is the pillow beneath my head as dread sweeps over the world Haunting dreams with chilling screams shrill as a lonely wind Crisp and cool is the linen sheet ample and soft in my generous bed Instead of the act of counting sheep I count the ones who trudge the night who shake with fear in weary flight While those who sit so eagerly sit smug and bask, contently reek with pride who boast philanthropy What consequence lie the victory? Who pretends surprise that when a limping peace Returns in fragments a nation's youth Do they turn their heads, for second look? Those who stand erect in patriotic pride Forgetful that it was not they who've sacrificed? When dread sweeps over the world tonight Bleak as a wind in the desperate fight As I lay myself down to go to sleep I pray for young souls who now lay dead And pray for souls that trudge the night And all the brave who fight the fight Now I lay me down to sleep And last I pray for those who weep... ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2015 6:29:00 PM
Carrie, it was nice seeing Cyndi's "I CAN'T BREATHE, generous list." Hope you enjoyed the showcase of this powerful contest theme, thank you for sharing the message. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2015 9:30:00 AM
very moving poem Carrie congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:55:00 AM
Carrie, the last couplet...a tear for all.
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:53:00 AM
fascinating write with much pathos, carrie. …goody cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:25:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Miranda's fine contest with this hearfelt family poem. Happy Easter to you and your family....:)
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:29:00 AM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Carrie. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, Carrie. Sending you joyful Easter wishes. Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your sensational win in Miranda's contest with this illustrious account in poetry of the Vietnam War ... enjoy another top ten win with luv..
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:27:00 AM
this is amazing. bless your talent and your prayer "for those who weep..." thank you for your congratulations and comments. Tamra
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:51:00 PM
Nice and heartfelt poem Carrie. congratulations on your hm. Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:03:00 PM
Beautifully done, Carrie. This prayer is far more fiting in this context than it is for little children ... "if I should die before I wake" was sheer child abuse ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Debra's contest.
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM. TL
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:46:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/19/2009 8:15:00 PM
Thank-you for remembering the verterans, who didn't have a choice, and for the tears of rememberance for my friends who never got the chance to come home- Bless you Dear Carrie- Love, poet butterfly
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:00:00 PM
~ But, those are just my humbled and personal thoughts....And, this is "Your Magnificent Poem, And, It Is Extremely Stirring, To The Core of Ones Very Deepest Soul!!!":):) ~ "One of 'Your' Very Best, Beautiful Carrie Richards" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' Until The Ends of Time, John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear Gifted Lady," Bye ~
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:52:00 PM
~ I have often considered, how would it be that I would wish to die; if, I ever had such a choice!!? It would not be young! Yet if it had to be; then it would be for anothers life; no matter what age I were!!? And "Beautiful Carrie," I love "Your" repeated reference towards prayer here; for I have always believed, that prayer, is one of the greatest things that a life could ever do, for themselves and others!!!?:):) ~ Cont. ~
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:47:00 PM
~ "When dread sweeps over the world - Bleak as a wind in the night - As I lay me down to sleep - I pray for young souls who now lay dead - And pray for souls that trudge the night - And all the brave who fight the fight - now I lay me down to sleep - And last I pray for those who weep..." ~ First I would like to say, that this is very sincere, somber, profound, beautifully written and deep!!!:):) ~ Cont. ~
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:36:00 PM
touched me deep--charma
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Date: 7/15/2009 9:53:00 AM
A wonderful and powerful display of verses here Carrie, that shows your heart. Sad, yet well delivered. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments, always appreciated.
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Date: 7/14/2009 3:31:00 PM
yes, who passes their brother on the street and walks a wide circle, afraid the mumbling, tattered, bent-over dirty man shuffling by is a danger? more likely a veteran who defended our right to shop at the mall, and lost everything.... oh, great poem! Carrie! this gets my pen shiverin' to post one too!! jim
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:48:00 AM
Carrie the title caught my eye, I pray that little prayer nearly every night I go to bed. This one brought tears to my eyes, all I can say is God bless those men and women and comfort the ones left behind. To date this one touched my heart more than any you have written. God Bless. Ron... I hope it is alright I added this one to my favs. list.
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