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November's Leafless Repose

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Below is the poem entitled November's Leafless Repose which was written by poet Lori Lucas McClure. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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November's Leafless Repose

October is crowned with glory.
She is touched with Heaven’s glow.
The seasons declare her rise to glory
Her majestic laurel-leafed crown in
magnificent display, with jeweled leaves adorned.

O northern wind, command her before thee to bow, and
cast forth her golden crown. 
Lay her upon forest floors of crushed velvet brown.   
Her reign deposed she now lies in November’s leafless repose

for Brian Strand's contest 
1st place win 

Note: some how my poem and comments were 
completely erased

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  1. Date: 11/7/2011 3:35:00 PM
    BEAUTIFUL (: I really enjoyed this. I loved the depth of your words.

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 3:09:00 PM
    Beautiful verse Lori, You slide into november with such subtle grace and the quietness of the last 2 lines is so satisfying.

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 7:23:00 AM
    I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Lori. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 12:53:00 AM
    WOW, Lori, this is so deserving of first place. WAS this an oldie? That would explain it maybe getting erased. But here it is. Did you repost it right before he judged it?

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure
    Date: 10/24/2011 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea for your kind comment. My poem was new for Brians contest I don't know what happened but some how it along with my comments were all gone. I reposted it after it had been judged. Life's full of Mystries! LOL Thanks again---Lori