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Nothing Happened Here

Windowless space screams Feet spasm in betrayal It's too late to change his fate Chair pushed to the side Life tossed away in the trash If only the rope could talk... for Rick's Contest "A Chair On A Shadowy Room"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/14/2011 2:57:00 PM
I'm glad you told us nothing happened. My neck was feeling the fatal pull. Outstanding! Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Iolanda. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:10:00 AM
Rereading this one too, which I also loved. Sorry I am not finding one of yours I've not seen before. mY back is starting to kill me so I really need to get to bed. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:14:00 PM
Wow, I love this Iolanda, you say so much with a few lines.. Love it and congratulations on your win.. Btw I could organise someone to iron your sheets ;) thanks for the comment you made me smile, love you Wilma
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:04:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation and comments on my poem Iris. Yes, it was a pleasure to read the poem to a largen audience of Iasi. I did visit very many places in Maldova area including that famous Dracula Palace. Soup Mail!!!!.
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in ^Rick Parise's "Chair In A Shadowed Room" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:52:00 PM
Good to see this write has been awarded a winning placement Iolanda...
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Date: 6/8/2011 4:12:00 AM
Oh magosh! Youve got a whole epic going here in this little poem!... a tragedy at that. Whew... this one gets a whole array of feelings and imagination going, Iolanda. The story begs to be heard and fathomed. No wonder its a winner. Congrats to you
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:32:00 PM
Iolanda, yours here was one of favorites. Congrats. Wish it had scored higher. by the way, I loved the article you wrote on empty nesters.I LOVED getting an empty nest. well, it said i had to join up in order to make a comment but I did not want to join. Just wanted you to know I read it. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:46:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of rick, iolanda
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:43:00 PM
Wow, you are coming up with amazing dark stuff lately. I love this one. And the title, wow! How fun, those jeans I wrote of long disappeared. I wish I knew what happened to them! They were always so nice to have around. oh, I saw you wanted me at Linkeden. Gosh, I don't even use that anymore and I forgot my password to let you connect with me there!goodnight now, Finally can get off here and watch Bachelor!
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:27:00 PM
stark emotions overflow, iols... reamrkable piece with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:03:00 AM
Wonderful deep write...best wishes..
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