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Not Salty or Sweet

Goldilocks entered
    The cottage and felt hungry
       Three bowls of porridge
          One was too salty, one was 
             Too sweet and one was just right*

*very loosely based on the famous fairytale

For Andrea’s Sweet or Salty contest

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Loved the hungry bears write and best wishes for contest results Jack..'

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:02:00 AM
    I'm sure Andrea will love this,, i know i do...

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Jack a good take on the old tale, should do well....David

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:27:00 PM
    Then the bears came home...oh boy, now that would be fun! You have expressed your creativity with supreme perfection! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your interpertation of the old children's story..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara