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Not Merely the Eye

Billowing, foamy currents Lofty, turquoise drifts Undulate as waves Rage through the calm of heaven As the golden stalks Bend in fields below Like hungry fire consuming All life in its path Seemingly engulfed The cypresses are the same; Ensnared in the grip Of restless fury By the skyward, emerald flame Would Vincent approve Of his brilliant work Being perceived violently? I am oft' amazed How a piece of art Takes on a life of its own Interpretation Lives within the heart And soul of the beholder Not merely the eye Vincent Van Gogh's painting, "Yellow Wheat and Cypresses" was my inspiration. For submission in Abe Lopez' contest, "Van Gogh's Van Goghs".

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Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 10:46:00 PM

Dear Donna, Congratulations on all three of your sensational entires making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Love, Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/21/2009 4:34:00 PM

another 3 time winner a truely amazing poet! Light & Love

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:02:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/20/2009 3:06:00 PM

This is really very pretty both in words and presentation--congrats on having 3 poems through! WIsh you all the best, Donna :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/20/2009 12:53:00 PM

How wonderful....you have three great poems that made it through the first round! Congratulations, Donna! Happy Holidays, and blessings on your son's marriage...may they be forever happy together:) Love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 10:13:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Donna >> James,xx

Date: 10/23/2009 4:53:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery! The stair-step format adds visual interest. So much truth in your words. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 8:06:00 PM

Absolutely breath-taking portrayal of Vincent's painting, Donna. Congratulations on this magnificent feature of the week. Love, Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 10/19/2009 12:39:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Donna. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/17/2009 3:51:00 PM

The same principle applies in poetry, as in art, like giving birth to your baby, each one is just as special as the last. They are like spiritual births from the very heart of your soul. Smile, Love, Moses

Adell Foster

Date: 10/9/2009 1:21:00 AM

Very well written interpretaion of van Gogh's "Yellow Wheat and Cypresses" I truly enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2009 11:59:00 AM

Good luck in the competition. Nicely done and very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 10/7/2009 12:43:00 AM

Masterful writing, like Van Gogh's paintings. Love, Lainie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/6/2009 4:50:00 PM

Another gem as usual, Donna - Tim

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/6/2009 3:59:00 PM

Nice tribute to a master. I would have written "Inspiration" instead of "Interpetation". But you wrote the poem - not me. You must be familiar with the song "Starry Starry Night". Your work reminds me of it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Brian Strand

Date: 10/4/2009 11:40:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Donna.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

Date: 10/4/2009 7:49:00 PM

You have a special way with words, as they say, I can almost taste what you are illustrating here. An amazing Choka, an amazing flow with your word arrangement. Sincerely, Love Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2009 8:14:00 AM

Donna, per your question, I like the concept of making the addition you suggestion. It's not overkills when it helps drive home your message. And as I've told you before, this is a fantastic write! Love, Carolyn

Date: 10/3/2009 6:10:00 PM

Great use of imagery and an artistic presentation--such a fitting tribute to Van Gogh. I like how you added your insight in the second stanza. Good Job!!! Best wishes in the contest. I predict the winners circle for this poem! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 10/1/2009 3:27:00 PM

Simply superb this Choka Donna, it's a Wow in my eyes >> best of luck in Abe's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/1/2009 2:59:00 PM

Absolutely, you will be acknowledged when I send this to my friend. Thanks for your permission, Donna!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/1/2009 8:22:00 AM

Donna, this is so lovely that I would like to share it with a friend who is not a poet but loves Van Gogh. Hope that's OK. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry with us today Donna. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol