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Not Love

walking into an orchard someone ate the apple i see rotten inside core silent teardrops falling deeply screaming inside noiseless pain a shadow cursing the sadness a ghost of mourning an empty void crying unfilled one vacant ache echoes sorrow suffering loss dreary eyed walking this road embraced in darkness lost a second heartbeat love you do not hurt inside i was a fool in loving love you never let me down only now one sees behind the mask a lying face shatters and breaks in truth love all an illusion love opens the eyes coldly lost in a million pieces all shattered dreams never to be found on a different planet in the reflection shattered feelings everyone a broken dream it was not love who done this to me sorry love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/29/2015 10:11:00 AM
well written....like this :)) rating..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 11:52:00 AM
aaah you touch deeply thank you with a blessing
Date: 10/7/2013 4:43:00 AM
- Not easy .... Dreams are important .... but not everyone will be fulfilled - Well written Liam!! - Have a nice new week!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 8:07:00 PM
Could it be the frog who ate the apple...lol.
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:05:00 PM
liam, love can open eyes, and easily blind one at the same time... love this one from you... very deep, and sad... enjoyed...Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hey Liam, Some wonderful words inked here my friend... Ken
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