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Not Actually Sure

Youth of Darkness Excelling at life after hanging between heaven and hell… Disproving the world of thoughts of innocence and naivety… Hidden in her fabricated shell of silence… The Darkness of Youth hides her true demeanor…known not by the world what she can be… Sacrifice willing to be made for others…potential willing to be wasted…to save the innocents… Foreign battlefields readily risked…to put her skills to the test… Troubled companions...train for the dangers of her future…by helping each other instead of themselves… She knows not what can be accomplished…if only she was revealed to the one most deserving to know of all…her… Her mind works above the capacity of her peers…but stays excusive to those

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Roxanna Johnson

Date: 6/8/2012 2:30:00 PM

Death isn't always the easiest way out. Maybe for the individual who dies but not for the one's left behind, light may seem distant or nearly extinguished but it is always there waiting for us to follow it:) Another great write!

Alex W.
Date: 6/8/2012 9:35:00 PM

I agree completely! Thank you!

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 6/8/2012 2:28:00 PM

Very detailed and interesting piece. I enjoyed this read especially the lines; "Hidden in her fabricated shell of silence" This line stood out to me because i can since the mood of this poem. Very strong words! keep up the good work :)

Alex W.
Date: 6/8/2012 9:34:00 PM

Thank you so much