Nonsense

Alcohol, cunning baffling powerful Anticipation for that next drink, such a pull Even though the negative consequences are dire More alcohol is poured on, fueling the fire

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 1:13:00 PM

Allen, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 12/26/2012 9:17:00 AM

Been there, done that. Great description. Congrats on the selection. daver

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2012 11:48:00 AM

Just happened to be scrolling and my eye caught your title, "Nonsense", Allen.. Great job... It seems as though alcohol consumption is simply out of control and the negative consequence of too much drinking doesn't matter....it's sad when we are supposed to be "in control". Thanks for sharing. Always, Annalise