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Through a glazed nightfall shimmering on meadows
Gold rays, moontones, widescreen-to-sky entices
When stars bloom freely on southern hour, find me
Tracing dusk's lattice

Catch the mist aflight before the glow withers
While basin of light reaches its finale,
Then my skin will begin to memorize
One nocturnal trail

For Craig Cornish: Sapphic Stanza Contest
by: nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:35:00 AM
    Oh, this is very nice nette,,, like a movie scene ;},,,,, I see below that you won with it as well COOL ;} Thank you for coming to read my Change of Season ;} have a blessed day nette !

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Nette, Congratulations on your "SAPPHIC STANZA" winning poem.. :) always~~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:37:00 PM
    what a beautiful poem Nette...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:46:00 AM
    well done Nette,,,, always ...Linda..

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:17:00 AM
    This is superb Nette. Your imagery here is mesmerising.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 9:22:00 PM
    Heavenly Nette! Line 4 brings it to another level! Hope the flooding in Philippines missed you...jimbo

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:33:00 PM
    I can smell those beautiful roses from here nette...another beautiful gem...

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Very, very nicely written Nette, I really like your work...peter

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Magnificent work. It's like you captured a blue moon and slow danced with it.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Great work..Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Such beautiful poetry Nette..beautiful imagery

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:48:00 PM
    This is quite the exceptional write of yours my friend! I am most impressed with how you've written this glorious poem, very awesome Nette! What a nighttime enhanced piece, with that special glow, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Ahhhh....just wonderful poetry from you.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:01:00 PM
    - You are my rose and I would like to give you all the stars in the sky .... lovely write my friend Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Ahhhhhhh...the brocade! Such imagery, Nette...Garlands of beauty are your words...Thanks for being so sweet and supportive of my work!!! HUGS!!!