No Shoulder To Cry On

Tears seem to be falling more often now,
as I lay in my bed, alone and helpless,
the darkness and the silence are with me,
my only comfort, offers no real help,
the clock on the wall ticking endlessly,
as my life ticks away, the minutes like years,
I lay on my back and stare up at nothingness,
the tears now falling down the sides of my face,
trickling into my ears, trying to tickle me,
yet, no smile can ever find me here anymore,
there is no shoulder to cry on tonight,
it was my pillow that ended up getting damp,
I know I cried myself to sleep again,
tightly grasping my pillow as if it were you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2014 6:13:00 AM
I remembered this one. This really bites into the soul. Great write and I hope things are far better now.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2014 6:36:00 PM
I still feel lonely sometimes, but I know how to deal with it a little better now. Having that solitude can be a good thing, though, especially when I want to concentrate on my poetry. Thank you for the great comments, once again. I really appreciate you stopping by, Mustapha!
Date: 1/1/2014 5:02:00 PM
Ohhh!! Sad one ..Good work about a sad topic...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I hope not an event in your life but just a topic about love lost..Thanks for the many comments this past year..Your presence at my page delights me..I hope that this will be a great year for you with many more great poems written..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 6:21:00 PM
This is about a real love lost. But, sometimes, when I write, I tend to dramatize the real feelings that I had experienced. So, it may sound far worse than it actually was!...Thank you so much for the kind visit, Sara! And, you are most welcome, I always enjoy your poetry! I have just posted a new poem, so I hope that you enjoy it.
Date: 10/22/2013 8:44:00 AM
I could relate such feelings Kelly. More than you could imagine. This was moving so I'm adding this one to my favourites my friend.
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:37:00 PM
A poignant poem from you. The anguish is clearly felt!
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:21:00 PM
A passionate write full of emotion great job on this one. thank you for your comments on my work. You like my historical poems check out the blood countess I've done this one on a real life countess. Let me know what you think please.
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Date: 10/2/2013 11:33:00 AM
Kelly, I can really feel your pain in this one... Great emotional display.... Much like my "I Never Missed You More"... I think you will agree... Hope you like it.... Jake
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:39:00 PM
wow...a poignant write, and yes similar to my September poem...great write :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:08:00 AM
This is a beauty Kelly, can feel the emotion while reading.. :) hope the week ahead will be a brilliant one for you *hugs* Wilma
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Date: 9/27/2013 1:48:00 PM
i leave you a little sunshine under you pillow in its warmth it might bring a smile beautiful piece kelly
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