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no one like her


There is no one like her- her fires burn deep inside
And her feelings she tries to hide.
But I -  I know her oh so well
And about her love I can tell.

Like an Arabian woman who hides
Her body and face
But her eyes carry you to a different place.

Her eyes are like whirl pools which
Take a hold of you and doesn’t let go
Till you reach the depths of her soul.

She puts you on a journey that you’ve never been
And in her heart you just can’t win.
She is covered from head to toe
And with that veil you’ll never know
What she holds in store for you
Until she allows you to follow thru.

Now that I have been allowed to see this sight
I’ve fallen in love with all my might
She showed herself in all her glory
And this is the end of my story.

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  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Hope SHE love it....I do !!! Beautiful poem Louis. - Have a nice Sunday and new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    rams Avatar louis rams
    Date: 8/19/2012 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    as always anne lise you put a smile on my face. thank you so much
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 9:46:00 PM
    I didn't like your last line because I didn't want it to be the end of the story. No, not really. lol. Good roll from start to finish. Nice tribute to the lucky dame, Louis. Your rhythmic style appeals. :)

    rams Avatar louis rams
    Date: 8/19/2012 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i could do a continuation ! ha ha thanks for your beautiful comment