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No One Like Her

(8/18/12) There is no one like her- her fires burn deep inside And her feelings she tries to hide. But I - I know her oh so well And about her love I can tell. Like an Arabian woman who hides Her body and face But her eyes carry you to a different place. Her eyes are like whirl pools which Take a hold of you and doesn’t let go Till you reach the depths of her soul. She puts you on a journey that you’ve never been And in her heart you just can’t win. She is covered from head to toe And with that veil you’ll never know What she holds in store for you Until she allows you to follow thru. Now that I have been allowed to see this sight I’ve fallen in love with all my might She showed herself in all her glory And this is the end of my story.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2012 7:23:00 AM

Hope SHE love it....I do !!! Beautiful poem Louis. - Have a nice Sunday and new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Louis Rams
Date: 8/19/2012 8:56:00 AM

as always anne lise you put a smile on my face. thank you so much

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/18/2012 9:46:00 PM

I didn't like your last line because I didn't want it to be the end of the story. No, not really. lol. Good roll from start to finish. Nice tribute to the lucky dame, Louis. Your rhythmic style appeals. :)

Louis Rams
Date: 8/19/2012 8:55:00 AM

i could do a continuation ! ha ha thanks for your beautiful comment