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Nightmare Revisited

Within the realm of dreams, insanity will creep. Feasting upon the seams, of the fabric, time keeps. We then lose the clues, telling us we should wake. We all pay our dues, for the nightmares sake. Silent on cat paws, it slinks with the moon catching with its claws. A scream harpoon, in black and grey. Runs, the blood red, pointing the way, to our bed, where we lie, 'neath the clock and cry. Tick Tock Wake?
For the contest: True Diminishing Hexaverse Sponsored by David Williams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 9:27:00 AM
Spooky.....nightmare poem Paula, well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/2/2012 6:04:00 PM
Great write that is very descriptive and expressive...Those nightmares or scary dreams can be very frightening..I am glad that I stopped by this one for it is so creative without using rhyming..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2012 2:51:00 PM
an excellent write about a nightmare - you've really brought it to life here! ~ thank you for placing me in your "unease" contest - i am honored to be so high on the list! much appreciated...
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:54:00 AM
wow, clever write, Paula - I really struggle with this form. Thanks very much, loved your contest : )
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Date: 6/22/2012 3:09:00 PM
nicely done,great write Paula,wish you the best
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Date: 6/19/2012 9:59:00 AM
I hope one will awaken from this nightmare! What a wonderful write here Paula! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:33:00 AM
very nice Paula...We then loose the clues?
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Date: 6/19/2012 12:35:00 AM
Very nice...I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 6/18/2012 10:36:00 PM
Scary but the only way to get over it is hav complete faith .Nice write .
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