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Nightmare of a Beautiful Dream

I dreamt my mother mourned a broken doll, porcelain, sad brown eyes, and five feet tall. Entombed it in the finest place she could, a cottage encircled by sunlit wood. She danced a silent waltz with it, keening, encouraging life in the wretched thing. And it mended as she was worn away. She did not hear when warned of her decay. I was left a pristine porcelain doll, and a broken mother in its enthrall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Brittany. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 PM
Very interesting winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:56:00 PM
Brittany, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:50:00 AM
This is an incredible write. I got goosebumps while reading it. A fave!
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:02:00 AM
More congratulations Brittany,well deserved too xx
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congrats Brittany on your 4th place win I my Deep Dream contest.. bravo!! hugs Michael
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:43:00 AM
Great poem Brittany, congrats ...Seren
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Date: 11/13/2012 3:07:00 AM
Powerful write, Brittany...dreams are a fascinating phenomenon, aren't they?...If this is for the contest it reads like a sure winner - Tim
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