Nightime Brings Death To Me

moving into the night, i saw such a great sight
lifting my head to plee, what has been done to me
before i knew it, i was being held
by men of night, i couldn't yell
and just so quickly the grip breaks free, to see a gun pointing straight at me,
but how,who,and why
listen to the night
it whispers things, you don't want to hear
like your death being yelled in your ear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/2/2009 3:36:00 AM
Scary read Faire, oozes images of fear big time>>James
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:31:00 PM
I really liked this, it makes me think of dreams and the time I had a home invasion. Very scary. I loved it.....Aleera
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Date: 3/22/2009 7:53:00 PM
Dear Faire, A bit morbid but easy flowing YOUR Talent Grows SUPERB ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/22/2009 11:23:00 AM
oooowwww this is a great poem, when i was little about 8 I had to have the landing light on before i could sleep, I was so scared of the dark, well it was more of being scared of sing a ghost or something I once saw smoke it made me scream i though the house was on fire but it wasn't thanks to God I no longer get what they call night terrors or night mares. take care from diane
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