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Night Wanderer

She walks through the alleys in the middle of the night, there are only a couple of them so we see her all the time. Her face glows blue, so blue like the moon. her face glows with sadness and neglect. Her feet are bare but she doesn't seem to care, I would care if my feet were bare... Yet she shivers, so discretely it's almost undetected Somehow I just see through into the night She has my pity from afar, and I don't even know her name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/19/2014 9:49:00 PM
I like your writing style. Unique, keep challenging yourself. Try a Sestina or perhaps a Monotetra!! Keep it up!!Asavvy1
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Date: 12/9/2011 3:49:00 PM
nice poem/short story. It reminds me of a poem i wrote not too long ago. Awesome piece. - Kyle
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