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Below is the poem entitled NIGHT STARTS which was written by poet Andrew Crisci. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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                                           NIGHT STARTS

                                            Night starts
                                       as the clock strikes
                                  nine for all dreamy hearts,
                           and he dressed in black announces
                        darkness with a trumpet nobody played  
                                 for lovers awaiting surprises;
                               misty sky, hiding the pretty stars, 
                                   make each cloud disappear
                                        and let dreamers
                                              still sigh!

Entered in Nette onclaud's contest,
" Just Nine Lines "
Pic:  # 2
Written by Andrew Crisci
on 9/ 8/ 2013


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  1. Date: 9/10/2013 11:51:00 PM
    oh geee, this is so beautiful, andrew .. though it somehow missed the basics of a rictameter, i just had to cite your piece.. congrats and check my blog as i spoke about it..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:20:00 PM
    This is gorgeous, but I want to tell you something you can try to change as quickly as possible. Your rictameter has to both begin and end with the same two syllable line. I had to quickly redo mine when I put it up last night because I saw that rule at the last moment.