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Night Craves

Fudgesickles on a stick will do the trick to curb your appetite way at night the only problem is they're next to the orange cream and once you see them looking at you if you don't have one of those too you will turn a deep shade of blue and once that orange cream is gone you just have to eat another one... so, on and on it goes.... all through the night... no need to fight an urge such as this...

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Date: 1/1/2013 11:27:00 PM
I personally like orange creme sickles. Good poem - JH
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:24:00 PM
Eating before going to bed is the easiest way to gain weight. You have described everything clearly with your simple and easy to read wording.
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:44:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Polly. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:43:00 AM
Sounds like a diabetic's nightmare - very well written! Liz
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