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Night Craves

Fudgesickles on a stick
will do the trick
to curb your appetite
way at night
the only problem is
they're next to the 
orange cream
and once you see
them looking at you
if you don't have one
of those too
you will turn a deep
shade of blue
and once that orange
cream is gone
you just have to eat
another one... so, on
and on it goes....
all through the night...
no need to fight
an urge such as this...

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 11:27:00 PM
    I personally like orange creme sickles. Good poem - JH

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:24:00 PM
    Eating before going to bed is the easiest way to gain weight. You have described everything clearly with your simple and easy to read wording.

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 11:44:00 AM
    I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Polly. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 3:43:00 AM
    Sounds like a diabetic's nightmare - very well written! Liz