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new style..few haikus about feelings

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new style..few haikus about feelings

My eternal soul
    sizzling out of Heaven
wandering somewhere

Blissful ignorance
    Fairy tale world plays onward
Truth is forgotten

Hidden behind books
    daydreaming these words come true
Waiting for true love

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  1. Date: 8/22/2009 2:34:00 PM
    thankyou. You have to excuse me im still new to this. To me it just seems like a haiku because of the form.

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 12:59:00 PM
    I made a mistake in my previous comment, Ariabelle...It's a choka! Have a great day. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 7:34:00 AM
    Good morning Ariabelle. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 10:29:00 PM
    thankyou guys for the comments.:)

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 5:49:00 PM
    Very dreamy write you did a great job! I like the feeling it imitates! Laura :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 3:48:00 PM
    very well done :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 3:40:00 PM
    Your new style is known as CHOKA!! Three masterpieces, Ariabelle. I love them...but, particularly, the second one...great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 3:08:00 PM
    Interesting Thriple Haiku, Sara