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Never Forget

Never Forget Oh thou of wretched heart and deed Inferior our seeds? When thus thou felt the need to rule Annihilate deemed weeds Thou casteth out your wicked net Of guns and war bent twine No bulwark for the Jews was found Declaring heads decline Compliant soldiers marched the streets For ducats hedged your bet With waving flags and Hail Hitler’s Obliging hands were met Whilst cyanide was gassings Jews Obedience decreed In bunkers hid you reigned your realm Coward of plotted deeds When one man tries to rid the world Of an imagined foe Mankind will raise its voice as one He’ll reap what he did sow Completed on 2/4/12 All rights reserved by Debra Squyres @ 2013 My fist attempt with a Quatrain…..this a modified quatrain as per specified by the rules of the members contest: Historical Modified Quatrain 1st and 3rd lines eight iambic syllables 2nd and 4th lines 6 iambic syllables

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Date: 2/11/2013 3:34:00 AM
You did wonderfully Debra. I just can't write these with any success. Congratulations on your win! We can't ever let the world forget.
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:50:00 PM
Debra, this is one of my favorite contest... love it... Congratulations, with your amazing poems. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2013 7:49:00 PM
You did wonderfully well with the meter and thesubject should be lamented forevermore.Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/10/2013 6:17:00 PM
Good job with the form great topic! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2013 5:01:00 PM
Nice job Deb. This was a challenging entry and you were magnificent. Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:48:00 AM
Nice job for your first quatrain, Debra! My experience has been that they get much easier to write over time. I think writing with meter and rhythm is a noble ambition that every poet should at least try. I like the message of reaping and sowing in this poem.
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:25:00 PM
well, Debre, I am proud of you. I must say, you did excellently. Your meter is great!! way to take the challenge. and the topic is a very worthwhile one. What a horrifying effect he had on the world!!
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/4/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thanks...this sure taxed my brain !!! lol
Date: 2/4/2013 11:34:00 AM
Wow, this is a truly fantastic and glorious write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, a terrific poem, Great Work!!
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