Never Apart

The arrow went straight through my heart. 
Like me and you it split apart in two.
I will never forget the memories we shared, from the day we paired….
 To the days you comforted me when I was scared.
to the days where you held me when i was cold, or a victim of scold.

Not a single tear falls upon my face. 
It’s not worth the pain and tears. 
No reason to runaway.
 I have to face my fears. 
 I stay in one place. 

I’ll only move no faster than a standing boulder.
 I make my choice and stick to it. You had your chance to rejoice. 

You say your shoulder is free… 
every time I rest my head I feel as if I get stung by a bee. 
The stinger never comes apart.
 Strong and sharp.
 Moving on, much to look for ahead. 
No place to rest my head. I have made my thoughts said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/2/2011 2:56:00 PM
Hi Jasmine would you like help labeling your forms? so you don't need to put I don't know? This poems form is RHYME. Light & Love
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:43:00 PM
Creative and interesting write on Never apart, jasmine
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:27:00 PM
a deep write, a strong person that is to know a shoulder is just a shoulder it's not always there especially in the times of need,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:33:00 PM
The descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry are not bad. This looks like a decent entry.
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