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Neath a Thousand Candles

Twas the morn when the moon's thousand candles.. Lit a path for Lily Valley... Away from the always ~ Shouting...Never-ending midnight's darkness storm... When suddenly.....The easterly wind lay down... His breathy lengthy hand... Aside her flushing dew Afore the glowing forehead... Of the morning sun... Whilst the clouds grazed high above... Pretending ~ Not to notice the willows near by... No longer weeping.. As all along... The forest trees stood tall nearby.. Betwixt the sway of their green and lusty rumors... Whilst... The elder deeply rooted mountain... Remained a crusty spur ~ Moaning his earthy tones...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/26/2012 8:28:00 PM
JOHN, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
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John Boyle
Date: 8/28/2012 7:05:00 PM
Thanks ~ I didn't know I was... lol... Thanks again... :)
Date: 8/25/2012 6:13:00 PM
eloquently written verse! Extremely well done. Cindy
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:18:00 PM
Thx... I don't get much time to get on the net.. and haven't been doing much writing much... I just found this site and I hope to be able to add more... Thanks again...

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